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From technical point of view, it is obvious you're amazingly skilful, and your work is very elaborated. But from theoretical point of view I would suggest just a few things.
The light is soft and beautifully placed increasing her magic look, nonetheless, it seems to lack some accent. Meaning, there should be some 'place of drama' made only with light (and I can see you definitely can do that) to be a counterweight to all those wonderful details of the armor.
Sword design is simple and functional, which is great in making balance of front and background but it should be a bit more pointed out to the viewer, so we can easily see it's few centimeters in front of her. That's simple with adding darker shadow and more definition to lines.
That brings me to my last observation, hair lacks definition and temper, precisely - line. Line is infinite medium of expression, often neglected, especially in painting. I would like you to consider this option, to involve more line in such work (but not too much of it).
I may not be much of a painter but I do see this things and I speak based on study of art theory and history.
Once again, I must say this is one breathtaking work. I felt instantly inspired to write this critique, that's not often at all and I thank you for that!
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Cheers!