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Scifi girl

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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Nice use of subtle lighting, though those little bits of armor would be useless in a fight. No protection; she'd be dead within seconds. And if she's actually a robot under the skin, there's really no point in making her look that human (unless she works as some kind of fetishistic sex bot on the side). Sure, organizations might send human-looking robots on undercover missions, but in this case, the giant gun would be a dead giveaway. Speaking of which, there's nothing to balance out the gun's weight. She would need an identical gun on her other arm to keep the first one from pulling her to the ground. Also, if the purple shapes sprouting from her back are wings, her left one (the viewer's right) would have to be positioned in front of the backpack thing the gun is attached to. Otherwise it would be way off center, sprouting from almost the same place the other wing was. So yeah, it's fine if you want to make your characters sexy and all, just as long as they make logical sense. There are plenty of robot designs out there (here's a good example: lh3.googleusercontent.com/-w2C… that are unique and even a bit provocative, but still practical. I think more insight into this person's job would cross over into the design, and make her a more interesting and believable character. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt=":nod:" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="334" title="Nod"/>

On a side note, I've created a DA drinking game, and this deviation is worth three shots: One for a female OC with no name, one for sexually provocative clothing, and one if the title calls her a "girl" when she's clearly a woman. Seriously, I see that combination on DA all the time, and if I always had a drink handy when I came across it, I'd die from alcohol poisoning. That's my explanation of the low originality rating. Just a heads-up.

Hope this helps! Looking forward to the finished product!